帮忙检查一下这段作文英语语法等是否恰当

题目

帮忙检查一下这段作文英语语法等是否恰当
For the picture above.
As a customer,I have been teased by this company’s girl server.
Mademoiselle,I pardon you for this offence,because in many one’s heart girl is always girl.
But about this company as a enterprise I can hardly trust you for all I had experienced.
This impression exist in my mind from then on..
Perhaps I will recall this now and then,when I see something relevant.
Bingo!For this activity’s perfect termination,let’s open a bottle of champagne for celebration.

答案

语法没问题,但是有点不知所云