谁能帮我修改一篇英语作文 找错越多越好

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谁能帮我修改一篇英语作文 找错越多越好
My penpal Bill coming to China to study in our school next mounth .Now let me tell you something about him.He is from Amarica.He is thirteen years ago.And he has a brother and parents.He is outgoing.He likes helping others.He likes cllecting stamps and reading books.He also likes playing basketball.He comes to china because he wants to learn chinese and makes many chinese friends.And he also wants to visit the Great Wall and eat chinese foods.

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My penpal Bill (is) coming to China to study in our school next (month). Now let me tell you something about him. He is from (America). He is thirteen years (old). He (have parents and a brother). He ...