谁来修改下面的语法

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谁来修改下面的语法
I'm XXX,I come from XX,I am a assosiate student.I have the ability of good communication and coordination,good responsibility,and I have the abilities of logic analysis and deal with questions.I have once worked in XX department for half a year,then worked in XX department and have done some technical works for more two years,now I am planning to develope in XX Management Department.
我叫XXX,来自XX,是一名大专生.有良好的沟通和协调能力,责任心强,有一定的逻辑分析能力及处理问题的能力.曾在XX部门做过半年,之后在XX部门做过两年多技术活,现在打算往XX管理部门这方面发展
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修改一个英文单词为associate

答案

你应该说毕业自哪间大学.哪有说自己是大专生这样含糊不清的I m xxx.I graduated from the University of XXX (xxx大学) and have ever worked in the XX department for half a year,after then I have worked as a ...