修改文章(英文100字,满意加100分,

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修改文章(英文100字,满意加100分,
to sum up,despite the fact that Kraft enhance the takeover bid,with more than 3 dollor as well as 0.26 new Kraft share for each Cadbury share,Cadbury shareholders should refused the takeover,because of its exellent performance in 2009.In fact,the value of Cadbury had increased when in the first time Kraft announced a takeover scheme.Overall,through the result that Cadbury had a strong growth of revenue in the fourth quarter of 2009,the shareholders should insist on rejecting the adverse takeover.

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写的还清楚.但考虑这可能是个报告类的东东,稍稍地习惯少完善了一下.欢迎指正.
IN CONCLUSION,despite the fact that Kraft IMPROVED the takeover bid,with more than 3 dollor as well as GIVING AWAY 0.26 new Kraft share for each Cadbury share,Cadbury shareholders should DECLINE the takeover GIVEN its exellent performance in 2009.In fact,the value of Cadbury had increased SINCE the first time Kraft announced a takeover scheme.Overall,CONSIDERING the result that Cadbury had a strong growth of revenue in the fourth quarter of 2009,the shareholders should insist on rejecting the adverse takeover.