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In a nut shell,talking while eating is not only a severe pet peeve as my own aversion,but also a profound topic that people should resolve to handle with industriously .
这是最后一段希望更加有力深刻,除了not only but also想不出其他的了.但在这之前有一段
All the perishing issues will occur on ourselves if eating and talking simultaneously.It should not be belittled since there might be one day we are playing to hard lucky,our joy of eating,charming manner and even fitness will be threatened relentlessly.Hence,if you are a mature man with handsome appearance,do not chewing loudly or talking in mealtime,since it will shortcut your self-restrain;otherwise if you are a gorgeous lady with fantastic look,of course do not doing it either,as it rapidly destructs your inner beauty.
所以不要重复.

答案

　　In a nut shell,talking while eating,unlike singing while dancing,can not show your carriage to please to both the eye and the mind of others,on the contrary,it is sure to go for wool and come home shorn (弄巧成拙),for,doing so puts up a lack of refinement but also will be detrimental to personal health.
　　另外,前面第一句的 will occur on ourselves 需要在反身代词前加 us,否则 ourselves 单用不成立.