找个英语高人,帮我看看这篇文章有没有语法错误,字母错误等.（悬赏80）

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找个英语高人,帮我看看这篇文章有没有语法错误,字母错误等.（悬赏80）
Hello, teacher, you have worked hard, I wish you a Pepsi, good luck in everything! 您好,老师,您辛苦了,祝您百事可乐,万事如意!I began to introduce myself. 下面我开始自我介绍. My name is Chen Jia, in the sixth grade in Ji Shi school, this year 13 years old. 我叫陈佳,在济师附小就读六年级,今年13岁.I most like the color is green, I think green full of vitality, like youth, full of vigor and vitality. 我最喜欢的颜色是绿色,我认为绿色充满生机,就像青春一样,充满蓬勃朝气.I like drawing, reading. 我喜欢绘画、读书. My motto is我的座右铭是Time is gold and it is difficult for one to use gold to get time.一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴.
. My introduction finished, 我的自我介绍做完了, below I say why I came to this school, this is the most important. 下面我说一说我为什么要来这所学校,这才是最主要的.

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hello , miss and mister , you've worked too long and I want to thank you for your hard work , wish you luck . now allow me to introduce myself . my name is chen jia , I am 13 years of age and i am now on sixth grade in ji shi school . my favorate color is green , cause i think green is full of vitalities , just like our young age . i also like painting and reading . my motto is TIME IS GOLD AND IT IS DIFFICULT FOR ONE TO USE GOLD O GET TIME . this is my introduction , and now i am going to talk about why I choose to come to this school , this is the most important part .
同学,我帮你重新写了一下,不过我还是要说,对于一个13岁得学生来说,你的英文真的非常不错了,希望你继续认真学习英语,坚持不懈,更上一层楼,加油!