哪位能帮我批改一篇初中英语作文,表达一定要地道一点哦

题目

哪位能帮我批改一篇初中英语作文,表达一定要地道一点哦
In English class,we should be careful with our study（认真对待我们的学习）.
At first,it is important to listen to the teacher carefully .If you miss a class ,you will have some questions left(遗漏下问题) .If you can't solve them by yourself ,you won't study English well .What a pity
After class ,we should take part in activities about English .
we can also speak English in front of the class（在全班同学面前说英语） .don't be afraid of making mistakes.it's normal（正常的）and necessary for us to improve our English .We only remember that right one.The more you speak ,the more you want to speak and the better you speak .
Finally,taking notes is a great way.
Let's have a try!

答案

1. If you miss a lesson ,you may have some questions left(遗漏下问题) .you"d better solve them by yourself ,then you can make progress!
2. We only remember that right one.The more you speak ,the more you want to speak and the better you speak .
改为,try to express youself in English,the more you speak ,the more you want to speak and the better you speak .