初中英语作文（帮忙批改一下）

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初中英语作文（帮忙批改一下）
初中英语作文（帮忙批改一下,最好能帮忙加长一点,万分感谢）
Winter holiday is coming. What am I going to do? I wantto go there has been a place. That is Beijing.
As asoutherner I seldom see snow.so I want to go to Beijing to see the snow.
Beijing is chin’s capital. And there are manyplace of history interest. Such a sforbidden city and great wall and I believethat these place can be more beautiful in winter. So I want to go to Beijing in wintervacation time.

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Winter holiday is approaching. What am I going to do?I want to go to Beijing which I have never been to.
As living in the south, I seldom saw snow before. So I want to go to Beijing especially for the snow. And I also want to feel the different winter.
Beijing is the capital city of China with lots of places of interests, Such a s forbidden city and the great wall. I am imagining how these place would look like in winter and they must be a great scene. So I want to go to Beijing in winter vacation.Hope to have completely holidays.