某英文报以An Unforgettable Day (《难忘的一天》) 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。内容包括：1、哪一天让你感到难

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某英文报以An Unforgettable Day (《难忘的一天》) 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。
内容包括：
1、哪一天让你感到难忘；
2、什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的，……）让你感到那天难忘；
3、那一天你经历了什么；
4、那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受。
要求：
1、80-100 词；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

答案

A possible version:
An Unforgettable Day
I’ll never forget June 11th, 2012.
It was a sunny day. On the way to school, my friend did something rude to me. It made me sad. What’s worse, I got a “C” in my favorite subject.
After school, I went home unhappily. It was dark in the room. Suddenly the lights were on, and I heard the song “Happy birthday”. I was surprised to see many people and a big cake. “Oh, it’s my birthday.” I was so excited and happy. It was my first time to have a birthday party.
I’ll never forget that day.

解析

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求根据自己的回忆以一篇叙事性短文,记述自己难忘的一件事情。动笔前先要认真阅读写作提示,注意从四个方面进行叙述。由于是回忆性短文，故用过去时态较多，注意时态和时间状语的搭配。写作中选取自己比较熟悉的内同写，注意适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系,不要犯语法书写的低级错误。