请以“A good state of mind is the base of success.”为题,结合你生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇100-120个词的短
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请以“A good state of mind is the base of success.”为题,结合你生活中的一个事例,用英语写一 篇100-120个词的短文。 要求:1)记述事情的经过,内容必须结合生活中的一个事例。 2)简要说明好的心态对于获得成功的重要性以及从中得到的启示。 3) 文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称。 A Good State of Mind Is The Base of Success |
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A Good State of Mind Is The Base of Success Life is complicated. We can’t avoid anything annoying or stressful. Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind. An experience never fades from my memory. With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep, thus making me very sleepy in class. Seeing this, my teacher came to my help. With her aid, I adjusted myself and felt confident again. In the meantime, a detailed plan was made to go over my lessons. In the end, I managed to pass the exam. It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam. A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success. |
解析
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。 【亮点说明】范文主题明确,夹叙夹议,在语言上用了一些常见的短语In the meantime同时, In the end最后, go over复习,out of control失去控制, keep in mind 记住,句式上也是富有变化:Therefore, what is of great importance is that we should keep a good state of mind.这句话用了主语从句和表语从句, With a vital exam drawing near, I felt so nervous that I even couldn’t eat or sleep, thus making me very sleepy in class.这句话用了with复合结构和现在分词做结果状语, Seeing this, my teacher came to my help.这句话用了现在分词做伴随状语, It was a good state of mind that helped me get through the exam.这句话用了强调句。 A good state of mind is what it takes to realize our goal. 这句话用了表语从句,Whenever your emotion is out of control, just keep in mind that only by possessing a good state of mind can you attain success.这句话用了让步状语从句和倒装句。 |
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