你班就“广场舞噪音扰民”事件展开了讨论。请你用英语将讨论情况为报社“读者来信”栏目编辑写信。【写作内容】1. 广场舞是一种很好的保持身心健康的方式。2. 有些同

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你班就“广场舞噪音扰民”事件展开了讨论。请你用英语将讨论情况为报社“读者来信”栏目编辑写信。
【写作内容】
1. 广场舞是一种很好的保持身心健康的方式。
2. 有些同学认为广场舞音乐引起的噪音严重影响了人们的生活和学习，理应禁止。
3. 一些同学则认为，人们有权选择自己喜欢的健身娱乐方式，可调低音量，限制时间。
4. 解决措施: ⑴ 学会互相理解，彼此尊重；
⑵ 政府该为市民提供足够的活动空间等。
＊参考词汇：广场舞 square dancing
【写作要求】
1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
2. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，但不算字数。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell about the discussion we’ve had about the conflicts between square dancers and the residents nearby.
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

答案

Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell about the discussion we’ve had about the conflicts between square dancers and the residents nearby.
We all do agree that square dancing is a good way of keeping fit, especially for the elders. Some students argue that we should forbid people from dancing in public places because the noise caused by the loud music really affects people’s normal life and study. Some insist that people have rights to enjoy their ways of body building and entertaining, and the dancers can keep the noise to an acceptable volume, and limit their dancing time. We all agree that both the dancers and the residents nearby should try to understand and respect each other. Apart from that, the government should provide more places for the citizens, such as culture squares, parks and so on. Only in this way can we solve the problem properly.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

解析

试题分析：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】范文很好的表达了要点的内容，使用了一些很好的词组和句型：a good way of keeping fit 保持健康的好方法，Apart from除了， Some students argue that we should forbid people from dancing in public places because the noise caused by the loud music really affects people’s normal life and study. 这句话用了过去分词做定语，Some insist that people have rights to enjoy their ways of body building and entertaining, and the dancers can keep the noise to an acceptable volume, and limit their dancing time.这句话用了虚拟语气， Only in this way can we solve the problem properly.这句话用了倒装句。