书面表达(满分25分)5月 1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者

书面表达(满分25分)5月 1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者

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书面表达(满分25分)
5月 1日,高二(3)班的学生志愿者Li Yue 和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院
(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校
英语报的记者李华,请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道.
注意:
1.时间、地点、人物活动;
2.老人们的反映;
3.简短评论;
4.报道的标题和记者姓名已给出.(不计词数)。
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
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By Li Hua, School Newspaper
答案
Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly
On May Day,Li Yue and Zhuang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.
When it was time for the volunteers to leave the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
解析

试题分析:考生首先要仔细审题,包括以下几个方面:(1)层次结构,(2)句子的时态(3)内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位,这是半开放性作文,要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确,这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化,适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇,以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。考生要多使用复杂句,如范文里面的句子, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.这句话用了非谓语动词。Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.这句话用的是独立主格结构。
点评:作文要层次清晰,要点全面,表达流畅,切合作文要求,句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色,使用高级词汇及句型。
举一反三
假如你是中学生李华,你在学校随处可见“抛抛族”随手乱扔,到处有塑料袋垃圾,有些人一边走一边吃一边扔,有些“抛抛族”甚至是在清洁工人刚刚清扫过路面,他们跟在后面随手就抛。你深感痛心和羞愧。请给校长写一封信。
1.说明写信的目的;
2.对这些行为进行批评;
3.提出切实可行的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr.Headmaster,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Two________________________________________
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I hope my suggestions will be useful.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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前不久,我县教育部门针对部分学生沉迷于网吧的现状,向全体中小学生发出了“远离网吧(Be away from the Internet Bars)”的倡议。倡议书中列举了一些危害现象,请你结合这些要点写一篇100词左右的短文,对一位沉迷于网吧的同学进行劝告。题目和开头部分已给出。
要点:
1、上网(get on-line)浪费时间和金钱,并影响 (affect) 学习;
2、网上有一些不健康的东西;
3、长时间上网对眼睛有害;
4、远离网吧是青少年的正确选择(the best choice)
Be away from the Internet Bars
Dear friend,
I’m sorry to hear that you ________________________                       _______
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前不久,学生会向高三学生发出倡议:十八岁生日时,请你为父母做一件事。同学们积极响应,纷纷表达自己的想法。请根据以上信息,以“Something Special for Parents”为题用英语写一篇短文。内容包括:
1. 描述以上有关学生会倡议的信息和同学们的反应;
2. 作为一名高三的学生,你的做法及理由是什么。
注意:1. 词数:120左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3. 短文的标题及开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Something Special for Parents
Not long ago,Student Union in our school advocated that_______________
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假如你是李华,你校学生会于2013年6月15日下午举行了“校园书市(a campus book fair)”活动。请你写封e-mail 给你的美国笔友Peter, 告诉他此次活动的有关情况。
1.活动目的        2. 具体内容        3. 谈谈你的感想、收获和体会。
注意:1.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。  2.词数:120左右。
Hello Peter! How are you going these days?
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Looking forward to hearing from you!
Love,
Li Hua
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假设你校英语社团举办以“构建多彩校园生活”为主题的征文活动,请你以“How to Make Our School Life Colorful”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容主要包括:
1.单调、枯燥的学习生活;
2.建议学校举办各种活动丰富学校生活。
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
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