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我翻译的文章,然后怕有语法或者单词的错误,所以请各位大侠帮忙看看,有任何错误请不吝赐教.
According to the National Bureau of Statistics show that China's Gini coefficient preponderated over the international warning line of 0.4 in 2000.At the same time,the people's income gap is widening rapidly.In 2006,the Gini coefficient reached 0.46.The number from Statistical Yearbook of China shows that in 2005,Chinese urban and rural households per capita’s disposable income is 10,493 yuan and 3254.9 yuan respectively,which means income in urban areas is over 3.22 times more than rural areas.
In 2006,the highest per capita disposable income urban area of China is Shanghai,where the number reached 20,668 yuan.In the same period ,the lowest disposable income of the rural residents in Shanxi is 3424 yuan ,which is one-sixth of the average number in Shanghai.The gap between rich and poor brings the potential risks to the society’s development and influences the society’s harmony.What’s makes the increasing the gap between rich and poor?My opinions are as follows.

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1 According to the National Bureau of Statistics 跟Statistics show that 只能二选一.2 people's 前面不用 the.3 最后一句 makes 导致 应该是 lead to .而gap 的形容词应该不是increasing 吧,而是 什么引起 导致...