我英语作文写的怎么样

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我英语作文写的怎么样
Dear Mr Goo: September 4th
How are you? We heavn’t seen for one week. I am busy that I am having classes in the classroom. For this, We have a few time to talk. I go to the middle school of Sihui everyday. It takes me some times going to school. And I have met many classmates lately.Instead of Chinese, math and English, it increases four sujucts in the middle school. Don’t worry about me. I have found the middle school lives is very interesting. I made a big decistion. In return for yours,I shall be studying harder than before.The middle school is so beautiful.In the middle school, many tall building will be calling your eyes. The lake is quiet and bright.By the lake,so many plants there.You will be so happy there. Your student：Ben

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恩恩六年级啊,那很不错诶. 不过里面有些小错误.给你修改一下
Dear Mr Goo: September 4th
How are you? We heavn’t seen each other for one week. I am busy with all the class i have For this, We have little time to talk. I go to the middle school of Sihui everyday. It takes me some time going to school. And I have met many classmates lately. Except Chinese, math and English, there are four more sujucts in middle school. Don’t worry about me. I have found the middle school life to be very interesting. I made a big decistion. To return your teaching,I shall be studying harder than before. The middle school is so beautiful. There are many tall building calling your eyes. The lake is quiet and bright. By the lake,so many plants are there.You will be so happy there.
Your student：Ben
恩 有一些小错误,语法和用词方面的.不过六年级真的很厉害了~ 我特别喜欢那句： building calling your eyes.
哈哈我觉得非常好~ 总之希望可以帮到你!努力学习,天天向上咯~