谁用帮我修改一下这篇英语邮件?比如改正语法,用词,造句,等

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谁用帮我修改一下这篇英语邮件?比如改正语法,用词,造句,等
dear sir
we are a professional XXXX manufacture located in XXX city in china .Our products sell well in more than 20 countries and regions,including Europe,America ,which due to the Premium quality and competitive price ,we learn that you just in need of XXXX so i am here write to show you our products ,please feel free to let me know if you interested in it or you have any
question,Beside if you in need of any other slimier products you could send us the picture,we would do our utmost to make it for you ,I do wish to establish business relation with you ,
looking forward your early reply and submit our quotation to you soon
best regards
please visit www.XXXXX.com for more information

答案

1.manufacture-- 修改成 manufacturer 生产商2.in XXX city in china -- 修改成 in xxx city,China.3.which due to - 修改成 becauase of the premium quality and competitive price.(句号）4.we learn that you ju...