Last summer ,my parents and i went camping trip.I was very excited.Because this is appreciated a a

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Last summer ,my parents and i went camping trip.I was very excited.Because this is appreciated a a
第一次写,可能不好,请大家多多指教,将错误改出来.谢谢了
Last summer ,my parents and i was went camping .I was very excited.Because this is my first time camping.we got on the train,all appreciated a lot of scenery.we arrived at a small jungle.there are many plants,they are closely.we along with instructor has found a good rest.early the next morning.we started camping."oh!you have a big tent!"a little girl said.she about 7or8years old.she cames from nanjing.she name was sea,was a pretty girl.from now on,we became good friends,she likes making more friends.camping passes quickly.i was very happly, because i made a new friend.（过去式）

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括号内是改正的～有问题可以再hi我楼主～Last summer ,my parents and i （went out for a hiking）.I was very excited（,because） this is （the first camping in my lifetime）.（We） got on the train,all （...