英语作文 My home

题目

英语作文 My home
帮我看看我写的一些对不对,句子有没有错
My home is small,There are two bedroom、a bathroom and a kitchen.
I hava asmall room,there are a desk、a chair and a bed in the room,a computer on the desk,I like play computer games.some books on the desk,I sometimes read a book.

答案

标点使用不正确.My home is small.(表达清楚了 要用句号）There are two bedrooms,a bathroom and a kichen.My bedroom is small.There is a desk,a chair and a bed in it.There is a computer on the desk.I like playing computer games.There are some books on the desk.Sometimes I read them.