i want to make friends with you

题目

i want to make friends with you
because my major is English ,but ,sometime ,i can speak English fluent and sometime make mistake too more .and in school i seldom open my mounth .i so afraid when i have a chance speak English .
so i want to make a friend with you if you are good at English and you want to help me .you can send a message to my baidu space if you want and i will tell my detail contact detail addess

答案

but 后面应该是sometimes
fuluent应该是加ly这里应该是副词
mistake 要复数形式
i（am）so afraid……
have a chance（to）speak english
最后一句tell sb sth才对,
address.