一道英语改错题,急

题目

一道英语改错题,急
i can't swim because i have a strong fear of water,look back at my childhood experience,i think that three reason might explain the fear.the first reason is because i was not allowed to go near the water when i was a child ,for my mother had a unreasonable fear of it. so,even as a child i was taught see the water as something danger.

答案

look back at 改成 looking back at
three reason改成 three reasons
The first reason is because这边because改成that
something danger改成something dangerous.
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