一篇英语短演讲稿,修改

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一篇英语短演讲稿,修改
一分钟的演讲.我写好了.就一初中演讲,别改得太难,其他随便
THE POWER OF MODELS
I think models are very important to a person.Models are perfect in their heart.People are influenced by what their models say or do.
If you have a model,you will never feel lonely.If you have a model,you will konw how to do something that you feel difficult.If you have a model,you will have movition to purse your dream.You will never walk alone because you have a model.
A polite model teach you how to be polite.A kind model teach you how to be kind.A friendly model teach you how to be friendly.A good model can teach you many things.

答案

I think models are very important to EVERYONE.Only those people who have done something very well can be your models.You will easily be influenced by what your models do or say because you like them.Of course,you may have more than one model,each teaching you different things.
A model OF POLITENESS teachES you how to be polite.A model of kindness teachES you how to be kind.
If you have a model,you will never feel lonely.If you have a model,you will konw how to do something that you feel difficult.If you have a model,you will have moTIvAtion to pursUe your dream.With many different models for you,your life will be happy.When everyone learns from his models,the world will be better.