修改英语作文,

题目

修改英语作文,
要求：写一段话,介绍你的好朋友Jim.Jim来自美国,他比你高,比你重.你们都善于体育,但他跳得比你远.你的英语比你好……（不少于6句）.
Look,this is my friend ,Jim.He from the USA.He is taller and heavier than me .We all like PE and do better in PE.But he jumps higher than me .My English better than him.

答案

Look,this is my friend ,Jim.改正：一般的话应该是Look,this is my friend —— Jim.He from the USA.改正：He is from the USA.= He comes from the USA.We all like PE and do better in PE.改正：We all like PE...