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帮忙修改一下英语演讲稿
Dear teachers and students
Today,I want to talk about Thanksgiving.
I always wonder,how many people have given me help,how many people should I go to say thanks.I always feel very happy,because my parents and my friends always make me happy.They are the people we should thanks.
Parents are taken to put us up in the world.Then,they taught us how to walk; they taught us how to say ‘Dad’ and ‘Mum’.They always tell us we are the best; they always tell us to be brave and strong.They are the best teachers in the world.We should say thanks to them.
When we were growing up,our parents told us there is a place called ‘school’.At school,we met our teachers.The teachers teach us lots of new knowledge.Sometimes,they listen to our problems and help us solve them.They are not only our teachers,but also our friends.We should say thanks to them.
At school,we also have lots of good friends.We have lessons and play together.We always talk to our good friends about our secrets.We believe them and they always keep secrets.When we are unhappy,they always tell funny jokes to us to make us happy.They help us a lot,so we should say thanks to them.
Sometimes,some strangers will help us.When we don’t know the way or have some other problems,we ask some strangers for help.They always will tell us the way or help us solve the problems.Most of the people are kind and helpful.We should say thanks to them.
Everyone should know to thanks that the people who helped you.
I think it’s an important thing.At Thanksgiving Day,maybe you should say ‘thanks’ to the people around you.
That’s all.Thank you!

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My dear teachers,parents and mates
Today,I am going to talk about Thanksgiving.
I had questioned myself,how many helps had I gained from you and how many thanks I owe to those of you who helped me.I always feel very happy,because you make me to.I think you are the people to whom the words of thankful should go.
My friends(pause)
Parents are the people who brought us to the world and breed us to our childhood.They are the people who taught us how to walk,how to speak and even how to live our lives.They told us that we are the best,they taught us to be brave and they help us to stay strong.They are the best teachers in the world.We should feel thankful for what our parents did.
As we grew,we learned that there is a place called ‘school'.And at school,we met our first teachers,the teachers who knew lots of knowledge.Sometimes,they are our guides who listen to our problems and help us to overcome them.Sometimes,they are our friends who make us happy and who keep us away from harms.We should say thanks to them.
Along with the teachers,we met our mates in schools where we have lessons and play games.We share our secrets with our friends,because we believe each other and we keep secrets of each other's.When we are sad,our friends come to us.They make up funny jokes and and make us relax.We should say thanks to them for all the helps we got from our friends.
And even out there in the streets,we recieved helps,helps from strangers.When we don’t know the way or have some other problems,we ask some strangers for help.They always will tell us the way or help us solve the problems.Most of the people are kind and helpful.We should say thanks to them.
My friends,I am here to aware you how many helps did you get from the people around you and how many thanks did you give to those who helped you.Do you deserve those the helps?No.But do our dear friends deserve a thanks for what they did?Absolutely yes!
Therefore,at this very special moment in the Thanksgiving Day,let us give our parents,our teachers and our friends a big plause!Thank them for being great to us.
Thank you!