看看这段英语作文的问题（语法,用词,结构）

题目

看看这段英语作文的问题（语法,用词,结构）
Everyone as individual are supposed to have special personality,which means that people may prefer one thing than another for the different construction of the brain.So we can infer higher level can be achived if a person working on the the task find it interesting.It is common to see that a child borned with talent can have a more sucessful furture enterprise if his or her talent is discovered by the parents or teachers.

答案

我觉得没有捷径.
多背些作文,多背些模板,还有单词.
每次写作文的时候,加一点让老师眼前一亮的单词.一定会有加分的.