求大神修改英语作文

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求大神修改英语作文
Dear Mary.
I‘m sorry to heard your mother is ill.Last Sunday,I went hiking with my friends.At 7：00 in the morning we met at school gate.We brought a few bottles of water and some foods.We went to Wenfeng park and then we climbed the hill.On the top of the hill we could see how beautiful in my city.
How about you in these day?
Yours,
Lida

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Dear Mary,I‘m sorry to hear your mother is ill.Last Sunday I went hiking with myfriends.We met at school gate at 7：00 in the morning and took several bottles ofwater and some food in the bags.We wen...