英语书面表达,讲述一件你最有成就感的事

题目

英语书面表达,讲述一件你最有成就感的事
每个人都渴望获得成功,渴望体会成功的快乐.请你写一篇70词的短文,为大家讲述一件你最有成就感的事!
1,对事情做简单描述
2,分析成功的主要原因（努力,别人的帮助等）
3举例说明你如何与他人分享成功的快乐

答案

Yesterday our class had a football match which makes impressed a lot.
In the first half of the match,our team was in a very negative position.Some classmates were despairing.We seemed to lose the game.But our captain encouraged us.He told us to fight in the rest between two halves.In the second half,we all tried our best to play the game.As a result,we won the game.
The win makes me feel a great sense of achievement and the win is from our endeavor.