英语高手们,帮我看看这句话的语法对不对?

题目

英语高手们,帮我看看这句话的语法对不对?
However,to my mind,what these catastrophes bring to us are not merely great losses and grief,but,what’s more,reconsideration about our beliefs and behavior towards Mother Nature when we satisfy our needs for living and developing.

答案

1.what's more 可以省略,因为not merely本来就有这个意思.
2.如果beliefs and behavior towards Mother Nature= beliefs towards mother nature + behavior towards mother nature
的话.就改为our beliefs of and behavior towards Mother Nature.
3.同意try to satisfy 比较好
4.our needs for living and developing 变成our needs to survive and develop比较好