英语翻译

题目

英语翻译
Middle managers are in demand
The shake-up in banking has left a shortage of good middle-managers,especially at smaller banks which find it more difficult well-trained managers away from well-staffed larger banks.Other hot areas include loan review officers,technology specialist and auditors.
中层管理人员是受欢迎的
在银行业务大变动使得优秀的中层经理短缺.特别是在发现它远离很好雇用职员的更大的银行的更加困难的训练有素的经理的更小的银行留下好中层经理短缺.其他热门职业还包括贷款检查官员、技术专家和审计员.

答案

away from本句中译为“离开”
这句话是用词典翻译的吧,尤其是第二句,翻译的一塌糊涂!
especially at smaller banks which find it more difficult ******* well-trained managers away from ……您检查一下星号部位是不是掉了动词,如果没掉的话语法结构就不通.
建议修改：
Middle managers are in demand
The shake-up in banking has left a shortage of good middle-managers, especially at smaller banks which find it more difficult to attract well-trained managers away from well-staffed larger banks. Other hot areas include loan review officers, technology specialist and auditors.
直译：
急需中层管理人员
银行业务的大变动使得优秀中层经理短缺,尤其是那些小银行发现想要吸引训练有素的中层经理离开师资精良的大公司变得更加困难了.其他热门领域还包括贷款检查官员、技术专家和审计员.