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Domestic violence is a social negative phenomena in recent years,more concern for the community.Some people insist that this problem should be stop and solved effectively.Others regard that it as a exaggerated incident.On the whole,domestic violence does a great harm to family,it influence on the development of children and them life especially.
there are many kinds of domestic violences which include physical abuse,sexual abuse,psychological abuse,and abuse to property and pets (Ganley,1989).No matter what kind of those all have a serious impact on the children's physical and psychological health.The families which often happen domestic violences can easily make children world-weariness,fear and anxiety especially if the person do violence on children directly.Sometimes,children may feel inferior,loneliness because the family violence influence on the development of them and their life.However,sometimes if children cannot bear domestic violence they may walk out of their home and never return,waste their studies,even drive them to commit crimes.Parents are the first teacher for people,children will pay attention to the words and deeds of their parents when they were born.So when they seen it they will study and lead them psychological imbalance meanwhile they want to do this in others.Therefore they get violent
domestic violence is a big problem people can not overlook.government and the victims should play a very important role in solv

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首段的那个不明确的地方我想表达的是 有的人认为人们把家暴夸张化了，所以不重视