初一英语作文 帮忙修改下 急.~~~~

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初一英语作文 帮忙修改下 急.~~~~
A successful person in my mind
The successful person in my mind is Plato.When he was in school,one day,a teather told them,today ,I taught your one of the easiest thing,everyone must swing your arms 30 times everyday.At last,the teacher asked,who persevered to do it everyday,please put up your hand ,only one student putted up his hand, the student is Plato.
After he grow up,he is a famous philosopher.he told us,if we persever to do everything.In the end,we must be successful ,we need to believe success belongs to the persevering.

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The person I admire most
The person I admire most is Plato.When he was in school,a teacher told his class to swing their arms 30 times everday.After a couple of days,the teacher asked," Who perservered and did it everyday,please put up your hand.Only one student put up his hand.The student is Plato.
After he grew up,he became a famous philosoper.He said,"If we persevere when we do anything,we will succeed in the end.We need to believe that success is the result of persevering.