帮我看一下我的英文文法对不对

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帮我看一下我的英文文法对不对
In Padua,Kate was the oldest daughter of Baptist.She was a lady with such and ungovernable temper,so there were no men wanted to marry her.However,Paul was interested in this lady,be wanted to marry this famous shrew and to tame her into a gentle wife who would obey him.
After he married Kate,he started his plans to tame his shrewish wife.At first,he pretend to be a madman,he threw the meat on the floor to make Kate didn’t have anything to eat; he throw the bedclothes around the room so that she was forced to sit down in a chair.He also shouted his loudly so that Kate can not take a rest.At last,proud Kate begged Paul to give her some meat politely.Paul succeeded in making her wife started to obey him.
Then,Paul started his second plan.He promised Kate to bring her to see her father,but he ordered Kate to agree to everything he said.Whatever he wish to call it,that is what it is,otherwise,he won’t let her see her father.On the journey,Kate can also do it and

答案

错太多了.She was a lady with such an ungovernable temper ；he wanted to marry this famous shrew；First,he pretend to be a madman；He threw meat;to make Kate have nothing to eat; he threw the bedclothe...