求高手改英语作文

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求高手改英语作文
帮忙找出错误及原因,写出修改后的结果.
My View on the Post-graduate Craze
Recently,graduates are too crazy on the entrance examination of the Postgraduate.As i know .over twice of stuents than 4 years ago decided to do that.
what's leads to the crazy?In the past ,people can get a satisfied job after grauate from a college .But recntly,we can't imagine how firce the competition is to get a job.There are 650million graduates in next summer.Therefore,to be a post-graduate is a good way for release stress.Scondly,peope are more increasingly recongnise the importance of knowledge.To enrich their knowledge,they'll attempt to be a post graduate.Confront so many advantages ,people surge on that way.
For myself,i'm much eger to find a job after graduate.Because compared to the master's degree,working tend to be more interesting for me .
本人英语基础很差,都是一知半解的.学了这么多年的英语,用起来还是不知所措的.

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