帮我看看这篇英语自我介绍有没有错误!

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帮我看看这篇英语自我介绍有没有错误!
good morning every body I am very glad to introduce myself to all of you .
my name is liruixian.I am 16.I come from No.2 Middle scool.it is no doubt that I am happy to be a member of No.1 Middle School.
I am only daughter in my family I like listening to music in my free time.It is true that I dislike reading books .I like green and I like watching anime my favorite is death note .tell you a secret,my birthday is Bachelor's day It is easy to remember,isn't is
that's all thanks for listening!

答案

先说拼写,或者打字错误：school animal
然后应该用there is no doubt that
还有,应该用the only daughter,因为独一无二,就你一个.
还有,光棍节能这样说么?总感觉很有chinglish的意思.
最后,anime 意思是 日本低俗动画片?换个词吧,cartoons.