帮我检查一下,英语面试的自我介绍,看一下有没有什么错误.

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帮我检查一下,英语面试的自我介绍,看一下有没有什么错误.
Hi guys,
That is a writing for English curriculum interview introduction (a school's homework),and please tell me any mistakes that you found.Thank you very much!
Hi,I am of great honour to stand here and introduce myself to you,My name is Junting Pan,I am currently a senior student at Maragall High School.My major is technology and I will receive my High School diploma after my graduation in June.I born in China,and I have been in Spain for many years,that means I can speak fluently Chinese,Spanish and Catalan.I passed the B2 of CEF exams in EOI,so I can also speak q English.I am seeking for a job for an Spanish(or Catalan)-Chinese interpreter.
I have worked as a interpreter in an law office during the summer holidays.It was challenging and I was work under a lot of pressure because the office was always very busy.I learned about the importance of good service,and working in different situation and also resolve different problems quickly.
I would like to offer to work on probation for a week,to show you my working actittud and translation capabilities,and I think I can do the job well if I can work for your office,as I always work hard in my work.
I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.and please contact me via email anytime.Thank you for your consideration.

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那个,楼主,本人英语水平也就那么回事,说几个我觉得有点问题的地方,楼主瞅瞅,自我感觉良好的话就无视我吧.第二段 第三排 I born in China 貌似少了个be动词 I WAS born in China 第三段 第一排 暑假期间我在一个律师...