我自己些的英文文章 希望能得到批评!

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我自己些的英文文章 希望能得到批评!
故事背景是 一个写了篇文章 说他上希望去看戏,但他座位后面有一男一女 他们说话的声音很大,严重影响到作者.我只是把这故事复述变.(复述的内容是按照书上提问以问答的形式 简略些成文章的) 有什么不对的问题 望赐教!
the writer want to theatre last week,he did not enjoy the paly.a young man and a young woman were siting behind him.were talking very loudy.the writer could not hear the actors.the writer turned round ,"I can`t hear a word!"the wairter said.the young man said:"the play is not interesting!" 陈述的对吗?有什么不对的问题 望赐教!

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the writer went to theatre last week,he did not enjoy the paly because a young man and a young woman were siting behind him. they were talking very loud.the writer could not hear the actors.So he turn...