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要用英语作自我介绍,帮忙看下有无语法问题.Hello!My name is Tony,I g
raduated from Baochu Pagoda Experimental School Hangzhou.As many students(要不要加do?),my favorite sports is swim,I like swimming in the water like a fish.Also,listening to music is my favorite too,I like the songs which make me relaxed.However,I am not a very outgoing person.I like doing things alone(此处应该如何表达?).I am glad to be your classmate,and I am willing to make friend with you,I am sure we will have a nice time in the coming school year!
Thanks!

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Hello! My name is Tony, I graduated from Hangzhou Baochu Pagoda Experimental School.My favorite sports is swimming, I like swimming in the water like a fish. Listening to music is my favorite ,too. I ...