请你们帮我看一下我这篇英语作文有没有错误的地方.

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请你们帮我看一下我这篇英语作文有没有错误的地方.
有错误的话请告诉我怎么改,
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This sentence is very funny,right?
But it tell us many valuable things.
For example,it tell us,we should do anything with confidence.
Because you need know you must do better than somebody.
Even though you are very stupid,there are must ever more stupid people applaud you.
So,try our best to do anything with brave and confidence.

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有错误的话请告诉我怎么改,谢谢!
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx【Just the sentence.】
This sentence sounds very funny,doesn't it?
But it tells us a lot that is valuable.
For example,it tells us that we should do everything with confidence.
Because you need to know you must do better than someone else.
Even though you aren't smart enough, there must be many more stupid people applauding you.
So,just try our best to do it, bravely and confidently.