请帮忙修改英语演讲稿.My Dream of Life.

题目

请帮忙修改英语演讲稿.My Dream of Life.
1、请找出这篇演讲稿的语法错误并加以改正；
2、个人认为这篇演讲稿（我自己写的,我是个高二学生,但英语不太好）太中文化,希望可以得到指点,提升档次.
3、假如你是评审,在听了我的演讲后,你会提出什么问题,我应该如何作答?
感激不尽.
演讲稿正文如下：
My Dream of Life
Good morning everyone!It’s my great pleasure to speak here.I’m going to share my topic with you ——my dream of life.
The dreams are like flowers,gorgeous and clourful.The dreams are also like the sun spirited and vigorous.So if a man has a dream that he will be full of energy and go ahead boldly.
So small as I am,I have a great dream.I want to be a teacher,and then develope the course of education to enhance the knowledge and moral spirits of people,This is my dream,a lofty dream.
In my life,there is a teacher who has influenced me deeply .She has made me determined,positive and confident.Being my Chinese teacher,she had accompanyed me from Grade 3 to Grade 6 .Durine the days,She always encouraged me with her love every tome I met setbacks .When I made some progress she would al

答案

前面很不错,应该没有毛病,在后面的结语方面,应向开头一样好,结尾写好些绝对是一篇好文章,this is my advice ,wish your article can climb the higher floor!（I am a student in a middle shool ,the age is very y...