帮我检查一下英语日记

题目

帮我检查一下英语日记
我是一名刚学英文的菜鸟,写了篇英语日记,
Saturday,October 11,2009
Today i book a basic class .The class's subject is weather.The weather has another mean that
describe the somebody was ill.For example "I'm under the weather" .In the class a girl is as white as snow
sat by my side.But i still go to listen to the teacher.Today It's cloud(overcast).I like cloud very much.i
offten walk on the street that wait for rainning when it's cloud.The wind is blowing than i walking in the
rain.it's feel so good.But sometime it's stormy than lightning usually accompanies thunder bad luck.
Many people like sunny.In the hoilday someboday have a sunbath at the seaside.some clouds floating
in the sky so beautiful.The temperature between 33 and 36 degrees celsiues(centigrade) so
comfortable.

答案

Saturday,October 11,2009Today I have booked a basic class .The class's subject was weather.Weather has another meaning which describes that somebody is ill,for example,I'm under the weather.A girl sat...