我需要别人帮我修改英文作文中的语法.

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我需要别人帮我修改英文作文中的语法.
Thomas Tsai
I am the advisor at Coast Community College.I need to help my student to get the best choice every day.It was because some students don’t know how to choose the course really helpful for their future.Thomas Tsai is in which students I am saying.Thomas Tsai is a first year student in college,maybe this is the reason Thomas don’t know how to choose the course.Thomas Tsai has a heavy course in this semester and he plan to transfer to Coast State University after two years,it means Thomas Tsai need to get the good grade after two years and get the enough credit.But Thomas Tsai is busy,Thomas Tsai need to works ten to fifteen hours per week to help his family at their family-owned book and stationery store.Thomas Tsai is his parents’ only child and his help is important to keeping the store in business.I think this is the one reason Thomas Tsai choose majoring in business accounting.But I still to know if Thomas Tsai keep to going all course he choose,

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Thomas TsaiI am the advisor at Coast Community College.I need to help my student get the best choice every day,because some students don’t know how to choose the course really helpful in their future...