关于English的writing style

题目

关于English的writing style
这几句话的writing style不对吗?
1.He tried to shake his head to make sober himself up,but that didn't help.
2.He found the sunshine over shines him.This is cause he can't open his eyes.
3.Billy still didn't believe her.
4.I don't know what do you want.

答案

1.He shaked his head to sober up,but it didn't help.2.He found that he was embraced by shineshine and couldn't open his eyes.3.Billy still couldn't believe her (or what she said/what she had done).4.I...