The sun at the palm of my hand ,perhaps it is just like a moon .

题目

The sun at the palm of my hand ,perhaps it is just like a moon .
这句话有无错误?
我手心的太阳,或许只像个月亮.
怎样能把 手“心”给表达出来？

答案

典型的中文式英语,中国人可以看懂,老外会一头雾水
另外,palm,就是手掌,不用特指HAND
The sun in my hand may be just like a moon.