英语作文“上大学是高中生的唯一选择吗?”

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英语作文“上大学是高中生的唯一选择吗?”

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as we know many people think that attending college is the only choice that the senior school students should make .but is it true
now,more and more college students can't find a job.so i think going to college isn't the only choice .the most importent thing is to gain a skill.no matter if one graduates from university or not,if he has the experience and ability ,he can have a good job
in my opion ,senior school studends have many ways to succeed,not just college.
这个可以吗?