帮我写一个英语e-mail作业!

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帮我写一个英语e-mail作业!
帮我写一个e-mail用过去式,
我要10句，不要生日的，逛商场也行，回答者：匿名 1-5 20:39不错，你帮我修改下吧。

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Dear xxx
Last Saturday was my birthday.We had a birthday party for him.Our friends Peter,Tom and Alice came to my flat.We had a lot of delicious food and drink.First,we watched some cartoons.Next,we sang a birthday song to Ben and gave him presents.My present to Ben was a chocolate cake.Mum taught me to make it.After that,we had a barbecue.Everybody enjoyed the party very much.Here are some photos of the party.
Write soon.
Yours
xxx