这是我儿子的一则日记请帮我修改一下,哪句的语法或时态错误指出来,

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这是我儿子的一则日记请帮我修改一下,哪句的语法或时态错误指出来,
but i'm not lucky at all,today is first day of september,it also is first day of the new term.but today i'm not happy at all,too.this morning,i got to school eary.the teacher got to the classroom early too.but he didn't give us books,because the books didn't come to the school.waited a moment.he left the classroom.we were free.suddenly,a girl behind me wanted to i close the windows.i said:"there was wind,when the windows open.why did you want to close the windows?were you cold?"she was silent,

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第一句的but用的很奇怪,或者前面有上文?如果承接是转折,用but是对的.第二句today is the first day of September.first前面要加上定冠词the,September要大写.It is also,不是it also is 哦.同样,the first day.第三...