Hello,everybody.I am Puyuhan.This summer is special to me.Because I know a person.His name is Huache
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Hello,everybody.I am Puyuhan.This summer is special to me.Because I know a person.His name is Huachenyu.He is different from others.He come from a single parent family.Not long ago,he is just an ordinary guy.But now he has many fans of the star.However,I think he is lonely.He is a litte strange.When he sings as if the world is his,and his voice can deeply touched me.He is my motivation.I think I have been deeply in love with him.That’s all thank you .
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Hello,everybody.I am Puyuhan. This summer is special to me.This is because I know a person.His name is Huachenyu.He is different from others.He come from a single parent family.Not long ago,he is just an ordinary guy.Now, he has many fans.However,I think he is lonely.He is a litte strange.When he sings, he is as if the world belongs to him. His voice can deeply touched me.He is my motivation.I think I have been deeply in love with him.That’s all thank you
Comment;
Not much grammar error
try to use short sentences
avoid sentence that starts with 'because', 'but', 'And'.
Personally, I don't like to use, 'that's all.'
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