英文作文(不懂文法)

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英文作文(不懂文法)
帮我看一下有没有错,怎样才能用不同句型表达?
Dear worried mother,
I am a student found of the Internet, too. Like you, my parent also about me. But there are advantages of internet and some of the websites are educated purposes. Student can make the best of internet for learning. For instance, they can ask the question immediately through the internet and search the information for self-study.
I suggest you should talk to your son in order to express your worry .you can make a deal with him that uses the computer not more than two hours each day after finishing the homework. It is useless that blame him for playing computer but try to reason him into study.
Sincerely yours,
Chris Wong

答案

Dear mother,
Don't be worried.
I am a student fond of the Internet,too.Like you,my parents are also worried about me.But you know everything has its two sides,because there are a great many advantages of surfing the Internet and a lot of websites serve the purposes of education,so students can make the best of the Internet for learning.For instance,they can ask questions immediately through the Internet and search for information for self-study.
I suggest you should tell your son about your worries directly and make a deal with him instead of forbidding him from using the computer,but tell him to surf the Internet not more than two hours each day after finishing the homework.It is useless blaming him for playing computer but trying to reason him into study.
Yours sincerely ,
Chris Wong