帮我看看这篇英语作文中的错误.
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帮我看看这篇英语作文中的错误.
Sunday,May 10.
Today I have Spring Outing.
At the 7:00 a.m..I went to the East Lake where far 30km away from home.When I got there,the time is 8:30 a.m..
On the morning.I have row the small boats,and lunch in a small restaurant.The food was delicious!
And on the afternoon.I've climb a hill,and admire the beautiful view.And I've took some beautiful photos!
At the 4:00 p.m..I have to return to my home.
today,I am very happy!
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以上是一篇英语作文.帮我看看错在哪里并改正谢谢!
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英语日期是先日后月,“May 10”,有误I have Spring Outing中“have”这个动词我觉得不恰当,而且,你整篇文章是过去式.At the 7:00 a.m中不用冠词thefar 30km away 改为30KM far awaythe time is 8:30 a.m句式啰嗦,改...
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