会英语的 帮忙看看有没有语法错误

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会英语的 帮忙看看有没有语法错误
I love English
When I was 8 years old,I started to learn English.I played games and sang English songs with other children,and sometimes I would watch English cartoons.It was very interesting.Then I discovered the beauty of language and I began my colorful dreams in the English-speaking world.
I hope someday I can travel around the world.I would like to pay a visit to Washington,because my elder brother is there.Of course,I am going to London because Britain is the birthplace of the English language.If I can ride my bike at Cambridge,I will be very happy.
I hope I can speak English with everyone in the world.Also I'll introduce China to them,such as the Great Wall,and the gardens in Suzhou.I will teach people all over the world about the beautiful language of our country
I like English.Learning English is wonderful.I want to be an English teacher.I also like Chinese literature.When I was little,I could remember a lot of poetry.I also wanted to become a language teacher.Now I think that my dream can come true:I will be able to talk with foreign friends and to share Chinese culture with them.Making more and more people be able to get to know five thousand years of history and culture,and prosperity of our great China.
My future is not a dream.I believe it will come true.

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I love English
When I was 8 years old,I started to learn English.I played games and sang English songs with other children,and sometimes I would watch English cartoons.It was very interesting.Then I discovered the beauty of language and I began my colorful dreams in the English-speaking world.
I hope someday I can travel around the world.I would like to pay a visit to Washington,because my elder brother is there.Of course,I am going to London because Britain is the birthplace of the English language.If I can ride my bike at Cambridge,I will be very happy.
I hope I can speak English with everyone in the world.Also I'll introduce China to them,such as the Great Wall,and the gardens in Suzhou.I will teach people all over the world about the beautiful language of our country
I like English.Learning English is wonderful.I want to be an English teacher.I also like Chinese literature.When I was little,I could remember a lot of poetry.I also wanted to become a language teacher.Now I think that my dream can come true:I will be able to talk with foreign friends and to share Chinese culture with them.Making more and more people be able to get to know five thousand years of history and culture,and prosperity of our great China.
My future is not a dream.I believe it will come true.
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