高分求英语书面表达.

题目

高分求英语书面表达.
假设你叫李华,于2010年暑假参加了为期十天的美国夏令营活动.根据下列信息用英语写一篇短文介绍难忘的经历,便于同学对此有所了解.
参加人员；六十多名来自世界各地的中学生和个别老师.
活动内容：参观名胜古迹和一些著名的大学.
购物,举办英语晚会.
收获：愉快之旅,结实了很多朋友.
更多地了解了他国文化,提高了英语听说能力.
注意：第一句为你写好了不计总词.
一百词左右.
可以适当增加细节,使文章通顺.
不是叫你翻译啊,是叫你帮忙写哈有提示的嘛.

答案

I am Lihuang. I had a summer camp in America during the 2010 Summer Holiday. Even if it cost ten days, I feel it unforgetable in my life. Now I am ready to share to my classmates.
This summer camp had sixty middle school students and several teachers from all over the world. At first, we visited places of interest in America. Such as the Statue of Liberty, the National Park and so on. And the Statue of Liberty is my favorite, because it stands for freedom. We also visited the Harvard University. People there are really hard working and clever. So I decide to be the person like them. And then we went shopping. I bought little things since the goods there were so expensive.
The time of this camp was short, but I get to knew so many friends from different countries. Moreover, I knew more about the culture from other countries and improved my speaking English and listening.
我不清楚你那个第一句是什么,我就当你没有第一句话.我也不清楚你现在的水平出到那里,简单写一下吧.