修改 英语 自我介绍

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修改 英语 自我介绍
帮我修改一下这篇自我介绍,觉得简单句太多了,特别是几乎每一句都是 I 、my 开头.而且还不知道有没有语法错误.
Good morning/afternoon,.I am very glad to here for this interview,My name is XXX,I am 22 years old,I came from XXX,Guangdong provience.My undergraduate period will be accomplished in XXX university in July this year,and now I am trying my best for obtaining a key to XXX university.
I am open-minded,quick in thought and have a good team spirit.In my spare time,I have broad interest like many other younger.I like reading books,especially those about XXX.
Frequently,I exchange with other people by discussing problems in study; I think this is an effective method for study.It is prettily important for study to having good methods and high efficiencies.I am able to operate the computer well,I am skillful in searching for information in Internet.
I always believe that one will easily lay behind unless he keeps on learning.Of course,if I am given a chance to have a further study in XXX,I will do my best to

答案

如果是文稿的话,绝对不能出现good morning的开头,这是非常不正式的,如果是口语演讲还好.Good morning/afternoon,. I am very glad to be (语法)here for this interview, My name is XXX,22 years old, from XXX,Gua...